Another song

Well ive written a song, which is basically just an add on to my last one. personally i think its a lot better that "If Only" but i guess thats for you guys to decide. I plan on eventually putting the song on youtube so... ull get to hear it then i guess. And btw i dont think its finished just yet so if it sounds like its lacking something, thats why

"Together Now" written by Brad Rohrer

Cant believe were together now
Babe, where were you all my life
This song im singing oh so loud
And this feeling's oh so right

I looked at you and you looked back at me
and i smiled cuz i was so happy
we held hands and the kisses were sweet
and whats amazings that u know i wont cheat

(chorus)
Hold me tightly
Never leave me
I dunno what id do without you
Please keep close dear
And just stay hereI
love ya and you know its true

Its like you've known me all my life,
ya know its funny cuz we're the same height
And im glad that our last ships, they sank
And ive got a close friend to thank

cuz of her i finally have someone to
chorus

Im so glad God gave you to me
I was blind but now i can see
That you
Are the most beautiful lady (harmonization)

chorus